Tuesday, 27 May 2014

Book Review – Opal-the journey of an understanding heart

Drawing by Merie Strates. 
Book Review – Opal-the journey of an understanding heart
Opal Whiteley opens her diaries and her heart, slips her small hand into ours, and leads us on a gentle journey back into her early childhood, chatting all the while, sharing her feelings and instructing always on the knowledge she has gleaned from the world around her. Reading this touching journal as if standing over her shoulder we relearn what we have forgotten and appreciate what we long ago did overlook.

Whiteley lived in an Oregon lumber camp in the early 1900’s. It is believed that she was orphaned; yet despite living with an adopted family she remained lonely. The precocious young girl took solace in nature, writing her thoughts in crayoned block letters on scraps of paper. It is assumed that the diary was torn to shreds by a jealous sister, but then painstakingly pieced together by Opal several years later to be published in 1920, at which point, it became an overnight sensation 1 and it is easy to understand why.

Her writings at six years of age, afford an unadulterated perception of a child’s world imbued with a deep sense of naivety and wonderment. This is not a retrospective narrative, nor is it a self-indulgent volume of memoirs. Instead it is the ingenuous recording of the experiences of her imaginative mind and the stirrings of her empathetic heart as they occurred moment-by-moment, day-by-day. The continual almost obsessive need for her to journalise ensures that her diary presents as a structured yet lyrical account of daily life in the lumber camp. Voyeuristically, we witness snippets of the intimate lives of young couples, we are close by when two of her young friends die, and we endure with her, cruel punishments at the hands of her adopted mama. We are compelled to read on not so much for the plot (which is restricted to a series of short incidents) but more so to continue the experience of reconnecting with our own inner child.

And so we gladly follow as she goes on adventures with her creature folks; and watch with pleasure as she interacts with the inhabitants of the lumber camp such as the man who wears grey neckties and is kind to mice, the pensée girl with the faraway look, and the girl who has no seeing.

We are enchanted by her unfettered imagination which transforms the mundane into the ethereal, the intangible into tactile and the imagined into concrete.
At night the wind goes walking in the field talking to the earth voices there. I did follow her down potato rows and her goings made ripples on my nightgown.
Today near eventime I did lead the girl who has no seeing a little way into the forest where it was darkness and shadows were. I led her toward a shadow that was coming our way. It did touch her cheeks with its velvety fingers. And now she too does have likings for shadows. And her fear that was is gone.

We are delighted by her affinity for all natural things whether they are personified -
Potatoes are very interesting folks. I think that they must see a lot of what is going on in the earth. They have so many eyes. Too, I did have thinks of all their growing days there in the ground, and all the things they did hear.
Or not personified-
The earthworms are out again. I wonder how it feels to stretch out long and then get short again.

It is all too easy to become lost in Opal Whiteley’s world, seduced by her imagery and touched by her compassion. However her heightened sense of empathy and her ability to express herself so well at so young an age led the public to challenge the authenticity of her writings. Ten months after its publication, her diary at first hailed as brilliant, was considered a hoax. Accused of literary fraud, Opal left for England. In 1948, she was taken to a public mental hospital where she remained until her death in 1992. Since then the question continues to be raised: is the diary a hoax, or the genius of a young girl? 2

We reconsider her journal and are somewhat downcast to discover that perhaps there is something too organised and too literary in the cohesiveness and fluency of the diary. There seems to be too, a sense of her being acutely aware of readers to whom she may well be deliberately showcasing her unusually extensive knowledge of great historical and artistic figures as well as a clear understanding of natural science, Catholic liturgy, European history and French vocabulary. All this is in discord with what we normally expect of a six year old.

At points, her writing gives the impression that it has been tailored to meet the tastes of an adult audience, with allusions to the romantic pastoral scenes and what seems to be a deliberate harking back to Victorian sentimentalism:
Lola has got her white silk dress that she did have so much wants for. It has a little ruffle around the neck and one around each sleeve like she did say. She said she would stand up and stretch out her arms and bestow her blessing on all the children like the deacon does- but she didn’t. She didn’t even raise up her hands. She stayed asleep in that long box the whole time the children was marching around her and singing, “Nearer My God to Thee.” She did just lay there with her white silk dress on and her eyes shut and her hands folded and she was very still all the time. Her sister did cry.

The juxtaposition of innocently presented observations with those which appear to carry sophistication and controlled irony leaves the reader even more uneasy and sceptical.
I remember the first time I saw Larry and Jean and the bit of poetry he said to her. They were standing by an old stump in the lane where the leaves whispered. Jean was crying. He patted her on the shoulder. He said, “There, little girl, don’t cry. I’ll come back and marry you by and by.’ And he did. And the angels looking down from heaven saw their happiness and brought them a baby real soon- when they had been married most five months, which is very nice, for a baby is such a comfort.

We wonder why she responds to the deaths of two of her young friends; Lola and the blind girl (who perished terrified and tragically alone trying to escape her burning home) in the oddly detached “uncomprehending” manner of an innocent child, yet she mourns the death of Michael Raphael, “the great tree that I love,” with deep awareness.

We note inconsistencies in her spelling that hint at contrivance (for example, physiology is accurately printed but scrutinising charmingly phonetically misspelt as screw tin eye sing). Such misspellings seem to occur only when there is an opportunity for play between puns and homonyms. Other examples include invest tag ashuns, pumpadoor, pit tea, adoors and (my favourite) cal lamb of tea. 

There are numerous examples of what could be regarded as calculated humour in the guise of child being unaware of the implication of her words:
I did look out the front window. There are calf tracks by our front door. Elizabeth Barrett Browning waited yesterday while I did get her sugar lumps. I think she will grow up to be a lovely cow. Her mooings are very musical and there is poetry in her tracks. She does make such dainty ones. When they dry up I dig them up and save them. I take them out of the drawer and look at them and think: this way passed Elizabeth Barrett Browning.”
One wonders if a not so young Whiteley was playing cat to the not so sacred cow of Barrett!
This is enough to make even the most ardent admirer and supporter of Opal Whiteley to at least pause to consider the real possibility of deception, but then we cannot resist the seductive pull of her sentiment nor can we decry the enticing warmth of her words:
 I saw a silken cradle in a hazel branch. It was cream with a hazel leaf halfway around it. I put it to my ear and I did listen. It had a little voice. It was not a tone voice. It was a heart voice. While I did listen, I did feel its feels. It has lovely ones.
There is no denying that these are the delicate words of an understanding heart. It is up to the individual reader to decide how old that heart was when they were written and if it really matters. I for one am more than happy to take the journey with that heart regardless of its age, over and over again.


1 Biographical note: Opal the journey of an understanding heart adapted by Jane Boulton 1984
2 © 1995 September Productions, Inc. ISBN 0-914101-02-1



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